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UPDATE: I have an agent!! + blog changes!

HELLO DENIZENS. Your resident writer has news to announce, gather around with hot chocolate and takeout ramen!

I'm so so so thrilled to announce that I have signed with the amazing Kiana Nguyen at Donald Maass Literary Agency!

A little about my manuscript:


When sixteen-year-old thief Mo stabs a runaway witch-princess, she’s cursed to wear her face. To break the curse, Mo braves the unfamiliar world of witchcraft where she must survive the assassin hunting the princess—and equally dangerous, her own desire for power.

Also featuring: demons, a curse, magical food, Chinese folklore, and a villain origin story buried somewhere.


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Snazzy Snippets: I HATH RETURNED

BLOOKUNITY I HAVE RETURNED FROM MY HIATUS. With more Mulan + Swan Lake snippets.

(I know I still haven't read all of your snippets last time, but I'll get to them ASAP. My bad, school is killing me.)

Snazzy Snippets is a bimonthly link-up I co-host with Emily @ Loony Literate. For those who weren't around last time:
It’s an opportunity for writers! Every two months, we post a prompt or question for you to share a snippet of fewer than 500 words. It’s designed to let you have fun, analyse your work on a smaller level, or just write something to join in.

If you’re not a writer, or aren’t working on anything, don’t go back up the rabbit hole just yet. Read everyone’s wonderful snippets on the linky!
Still have questions? Snazzy Snippets has its own page on the blog, with FAQs and more. Take a look!

Reminder that this isn't just for novels! The prompts were designed with novels in mind, but most are also applicable to short stories, poetry, anything.

Without further ado, the prompts (themed around the past):

A snippet where characters consider their backstory
or
A snippet featuring a child (i.e. a freebie for you YA and MG writers)
or
A  snippet from something you wrote more than 2 years ago

Remember to include your post URL in the linky! I'll be sure to visit ALL your snazzy snippets.

For those who are new, I'll be sharing snippets from my WIP, a Mulan + Swan Lake retelling. It includes monsters and magic, grave robbers, deaf assassin-witches, witchy rival-lover dynamics, and lots of desserts. I like to imagine it as VICIOUS meets THE NIGHT CIRCUS.

1. A snippet where characters consider their backstory

“Don’t lecture me, huangfu, I might actually remember your wisdom.”

Her father sighed and began brushing the sugar strands on the seat into the palm of his soft hands. “I tried to motivate a little girl who skinned her knee running from a street-performer’s fire-spell. Back then you were afraid of magic. Now I am.”

For half a year, her royal mother spent the two hours before midnight to read Mak the most ancient magical texts, and two hours after to let Mak touch the magic. One morning, instead of her usual nap, Mak snuck out and tried to burn down the vegetable garden. Instead she’d burned out and spent a week in a hospital bed. That was the first and only time her father raised his voice to her royal mother.

Out loud, all Mak said was, “A wonder you had the courage to marry huangmu.”

“Even you fear your royal mother. But you still have the heart to defy her. So why do you hide from Yi?”

Because Yi promised a windstorm in those eyes. Mak could only hold a candle to this sister, and she didn’t know if Yi would snuff it out or set her life ablaze. “My mother and I aren’t competing for the kingdom.”

“Yi doesn’t want to steal your kingdom. She wants to save it.”
This snippet features our second main character, Mak, who is the princess and heir to the empire. However, her position can

When an incredibly talented (and incredibly gorgeous) witch shows up, one can predict the conflict.

More about that in the next snippet. Of more interest here are:
  • Mak's incredibly fabulous parents. Let me tell you, those two have backstory. Not written down, I mean, but I just know.
  • Mak learns magic and instantly decides to burn stuff. A girl after my own heart.
Oh, and since I'm getting back into revising this (aiming for mid-July, once I have all school stuff out of the way), I'm now sharing my writing progress every week to anyone who wants to be email friends!

Read weekly snippets of MULAN + SWAN LAKE

I'll start sending them next week, so grab your takeout and hop on the train!

2. A snippet featuring a child

Mak returned his smile and stretched her legs outside the car. “I’ll look up your almanac and charm a pack of tea leaves.”

“Try not to mix it up with your poisons this time.” Her father frowned again and didn’t even protest when Mak took the box of dragonbeard candy. “And Mak—you’re right to be afraid of her. Take care, my daughter.”

“I think I still have the poison left from last time to deal with enemy sisters.” The cold garage air pricked goosebumps on her bare arms, and Mak hugged the candy box closer to her chest.

“And if she becomes your friend? Witchcraft is a fellowship, and you even call her sister.” Her father pressed the button for the shuttle lift to take them back to the palace. “Coastguard or not, you’re competing with her. When your friendship turns sour, it will ruin you. She will ruin you.”

Mak smiled a careful skull’s grin. If ruination came for her, she’d destroy it first. “Then she’d be making demons. What a traitor to the coastguard.”

“Mak,” her father called after her as she stalked out of the lift. “The Huntress is the kind of woman who is made from the fire. You’re a moth dancing in the flames.”
Since this IS a YA retelling, I could have chosen literally any snippet. But here, I think Mak is behaving like a child who thinks she can take care of herself. So basically every child ever.

I included copious amounts of food in this novel (thanks Cait) but I actually managed to make it a device to show character development (?!?!?). I won't reveal all, but suffice it to say Mak talks less about candy/cake and more about ... you'll see. *winks*

(There's also a high-flying all-rounded A+ girl who loves coffee. Three guesses why.)
Well ... two guesses left.
This snippet, though, shows just how melodramatic and unrealistic Mak can be. As I said: after my own heart.

3. A snippet from something I wrote more than 2 years ago

“They only remember Mulan fought a war. They forget she weaved at her window, that she asked the emperor for a horse to take her back, that when she returned she donned face paint and gowns. They remember Mulan tried to be a man, and forget when she was a woman.” — from planning notes of this WIP
For those of you who are unaware, I love retelling Mulan. This retelling is so very much about femininity. I looked through my musings back from when I translated the original ballad of Mulan and found this gem.

I don't think it needs further comment, really, except that this WIP is all about femininity and China and mis-identity.

Also witches. Don't forget the witches and demons. Sound cool? Join me as I ignore schoolwork and dash through revisions:

Yes, weekly snippets about witches and demons sound FABULOUS

Alternatively, join my takeout army and read the spinoff short story about a deaf assassin-witch conquering cities and critiquing tea!

You may have noticed, by the way, that I no longer use the title Witches Black & Silver to refer to this WIP. That's because I've thought of a new, better name — and it's nearly quoted in one of the snippets. Guessing time, blookunity!

Which is your favourite snippet? What do you think the WIP's new title is? And how is your own writing coming along?


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Snazzy Snippets: Writers, let's get vulnerable + spin-off from Mulan + Swan Lake retelling!

SOOOOO. How did everyone do with Camp NaNoWriMo? Or other April-y writerly pursuits? Snazzy Snippets is baaaack for writers to share their snippets!

Snazzy Snippets is a bimonthly link-up I co-host with Emily @ Loony Literate. For those who weren't around last time:
It’s an opportunity for writers! Every two months, we post a prompt or question for you to share a snippet of fewer than 500 words. It’s designed to let you have fun, analyse your work on a smaller level, or just write something to join in.

If you’re not a writer, or aren’t working on anything, don’t go back up the rabbit hole just yet. Read everyone’s wonderful snippets on the linky!
Still have questions? Snazzy Snippets has its own page on the blog, with FAQs and more. Take a look!

Reminder that this isn't just for novels! The prompts were designed with novels in mind, but most are also applicable to short stories, poetry, anything. I'm sharing a short story snippet myself this time!

Without further ado, the prompts:

A snippet that was difficult to write (define 'difficult' as you like!)
or
A snippet you had a lot of fun writing
or
A snippet you plan to delete/significantly revise

Remember to include your post URL in the linky! I'll be sure to visit ALL your snazzy snippets.

2. A snippet you had a lot of fun writing

Right now, the Huntress had idiots to kill.

She pointed a finger at the chair she’d been tied to. Orange-red flames exploded around it, then she sent it flying into two of the soldiers. One, two.

Then someone fired his rifle and knocked the breath out of the Huntress. The bullet turned the silver embroidery at her shoulder red.

The Huntress smiled. The magic burned, yes, but so did she.

Tossing aside the remains of her stick, she gathered the magic to her. A heat wave, buffeting her face, curling in her palms, roaring in her ears—

(secret: magic echoed in her ears, and the Huntress didn’t know what to make of it.)

Three four five were summarily tossed out the window.

The last one, with a colonel’s rank bars, gripped his knives too tightly.  He crouched between the Huntress and the Idiot, his lips pulled into a grim line.

The Huntress half-turned away to sip at the tea again. The colonel rushed in, his knives flashing, and the Huntress smashed the teacup on his head.

Waste of good porcelain, she thought mournfully as the tea swirled together with the blood. “I hate pu’er tea,” she growled.
This snippet is from murder with teacups or just teacups, a short story starring the Huntress, a non-POV major character in the Mulan + Swan Lake retelling. The Huntress is a deaf assassin-witch who conquers cities and critiques tea.

The entire short story came from the idea of a teacup as a murder weapon, and a snarky one-liner commenting on the tea afterwards. Yes, I wrote it after watching Spectre. teacups is pretty James-Bond-inspired as a whole, but more like fem!James Bond in China.

Hey, they took him to space once, it's not that preposterous.

Be the first* to read the short story with teacup murder

*I lie. Shout-out to Cait @ Paper Fury for looking over the first draft for me! You're the most benevolent blogging queen. (Also the only one.)

1. A snippet that was difficult to write [first draft warning, y'all]

Mo knelt by the body. Mo tugged off her white jade earrings, stained with a bit of blood that looked black in the light. Silver glinting at the throat. A locket, in the shape of a wing, rusted silver. Mo lifted the head to tug off the locket.

1. long fingers with silver nails, very pale lips, [more monochrome]

2. dying witch.

3. dying was not dead.

4. witch = danger and death [and so on].

5. it wasn’t murder if they were dying

Conclusion: Mo slipped her knife between the witch’s ribs.

Her hands were shaking when she took the knife back out. Shaking too much, in fact, to continue tonight. She rearranged the witch-corpse and dragged her clasped hands to cover the wound.

“Sorry,” she murmured, putting a hand over the clasped hands. She’d pray but what prayers could she say when no gods were listening anymore?
A little context: recently an episode of the 100 aired. I don't watch the show, but as I understand it, a lesbian character died and the media began to reconsider the death of LGBT+ characters. Which is fabulous and necessary.

But guess what this person did in the first chapter of her WIP.
After talking with some fabulous people and reading soooooo many Tumblr posts about the issue, I rethought this scene. And rethought it again. I seriously considered setting this WIP aside for later.

As it's one of my extracurricular activities, I do need to finish it to graduate. So I reframed the scene and tried again. There's more spoiler-y context to it,

Another interesting point is that in the initial concept, Mo was five vicious feet of murder and mayhem. Somehow she became a girl who thinks all the vicious things and does none of them. So far, I'm liking this change.

3. A snippet you plan to delete/significantly revise

the tiger’s paws were on her throat now, and she choked—

no stop air moonlight, moonlight, and every breath broke another bone monster run there was blood under her nails, blood pounding through her brain run where? home’s gone drowning from one of the eight oceans she carried in her ribcage you have found a new home, Yi, but the monsters


No, she didn’t faint. She just executed a strategic retreat with no backup plan.
I actually like this snippet very much. We don't get inside the Huntress' head a lot in the WIP, but as we can see in the short story, it's a rather conflicted place. More details, sadly, would be spoilers.

The actual thing that needs changing are the monsters. While they haven't changed that much from the original concept, I realise that they conform more closely in Chinese to the term 妖怪, which I feel demon is a more accurate translation of.

It's sad to lose the monsters-and-magic alliteration, though.

But I really do adore this snippet, especially the last line. It's so snarky and unlike the Huntress that we see in the WIP, who's been through a lot more. Enjoy it while you can, world:

Read the short story with witches, snark, and teacups instead of vodka martinis

Which is your favourite snippet? What's your favourite atypical murder weapon aside from teacups (and books)? And do I use too many italics?!? (hint: no such thing.)


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Snazzy Snippets: Valentine Edition (with utterly unromantic snippets)

Hello world! Before we begin Snazzy Snippets today — there is an #ADSOMreadalong for the wonderful A Darker Shade of Magic by V.E. Schwab, in anticipation of the release of the sequel A Gathering of Shadows in February!

We'll be having Twitter chats, so join us on 1, 8, 15 and 22 February at 9 PM EST with the hashtag #ADSOMreadalong. You should absolutely join us if you've already read ADSOM, have it on your TBR, or enjoy badass pirate ladies, killer magic, and cinnamon roll princes.

And now!
Emily talked me into a Valentine edition, and I thought, why not? After all, a lot of writers love writing romance, and I always accidentally write unhappy romances. Everyone gets to share, yay!

(Don't worry, non-romance writers — feel free to adjust the prompts for platonic love if you prefer.)

Newcomers, I co-host a bimonthly link-up with Emily @ Loony Literate called Snazzy Snippets. What's it about?
Snazzy Snippets is an opportunity for writers! Every two months, we post a prompt or question for you to share a snippet of less than 500 words. It’s designed to let you have fun, analyse your work on a smaller level, or just write something to join in.

If you’re not a writer, or aren’t working on anything, don’t go back up the rabbit hole just yet. Read everyone’s wonderful snippets on the linky!
Still have questions? Snazzy Snippets has its own page on the blog, with FAQs and more. Take a look! And remember: this isn't just for novels! The prompts were designed with novels in mind, but most are also applicable to short stories, poetry, anything. We welcome all types of writing!

Valentine prompts!

A heartwarming snippet that makes readers go “aww!”
or
A kissing snippet
or
A snippet where love interests first appear together 
(applicable for both future or established relationships)

Again, feel free to adjust these prompts for platonic love if romance isn't your jam! And remember to include your post URL in the linky. I'll be sure to visit ALL your snazzy snippets.

1. A heartwarming snippet that makes readers go “aww!”


Okay, I'll be honest, I don't actually have one. My romance subplots are not fluffy, okay? But there is a Matryoshka flashback for familiar love I'm rather fond of:
On his fifth birthday, his father brought Thomas a dagger with Mexrenne gilded on the blade. “People will always scorn you. For being a southerner, for being illegitimate, for being at all. If they hurt you, laugh it off and hurt them back.”
I ... wait, is that even heartwarming? IT IS IN MY BOOK. (Yay, triple pun!)

Thomas was born out of wedlock and didn't get to see his father much, but they did love each other. Thomas basically spends the entire novel walking in his father's footsteps, which may not be the wisest thing when one's parent started a war. And lost it. *squishes the idiot*
In fact, Thomas' father made many poor decisions in life, which resulted in his death. Spoiler! Oh wait, this is a story about finding revenge for his death. Join my takeout army before 12th February to read a spin-off short of Thomas' father's death! Not all is as Thomas thinks it is; rather problematic for a revenge story. *grin*

3. A snippet where love interests first appear together

Thomas tucked his hand behinds his back to hide the sweat and the shaking. He noted down the boy’s features one by one. Hair the colour of Niteran sands, eyes like the rivers of Valz Sommari, long fingers that slipped in and out of his pockets. His uncle would find out who this was in no time.

“I’m Daniel, the Chancellor’s assistant. Friends call me Dan.”

“We’ve just met. It’s too early to tell if we’re friends.”

“You’re too quick to judge if we should be friends.” Daniel—Dan spent his grins as freely as a bird might fly. ...

[Thomas:] “Kindness means nothing to the dead.”

“And vengeance does?” Dan’s whiplash reply might have made Thomas smile, but the other boy pouted his pink lips.

Thomas placed a hand over his heart and bowed. A bastard ought to be humble, even to a glorified cupbearer. “We began on a bad note, Dan, and I beg your pardon. Perhaps we might begin again.”
Thomas: raised in exile to play politics, child of the last provincial Governor and his much smarter lover. Dan: survived on the streets through a war and managed to find work in less shady parts of town. Their tongues are a little too sharp for each other.

It's no coincidence that their banter involves a great deal of parallel syntax — there's even more in the rest of Matryoshka. I knew from the start that these two would be love interests, but somewhere in the second draft, Thomas and Dan became polar opposites in morality and temperament.

Tweet this snippet and share the banter! It is, after all, one of their more civil meetings.

2. A kissing snippet


Blookunity, I would love it if you could be more critical about this snippet. I have zero kissing experience and I have this niggling feeling it shows. So help me improve this snippet!
“Can I do something mad?” Dan said in a low voice, his eyes never leaving Thomas’.

“I spent half my life in exile for a father I saw twice a year. I come back with an avenging widow and a merchant who trades in smiles. I’m accusing the most powerful person in Valzyr of murder when he’s defended by the only judge who’s doing her job in the country.” Thomas dropped Dan’s fingers and stepped close enough to see the other boy’s eyes widen. “You couldn’t make my life madder unless my father rose from the dead. Under the circumstances, mad is normal. Mad is good.”

Dan kissed him and tucked fingers around Thomas’ neck as if looking for an ocean in his trembling throat. The constellations could have torn apart and rained hellfire down on them, and they’d never notice. Not until they burned together.

Dan pulled away first. They were both panting heavily, as if they’d already run all the way through the capital. “Well, that was worth getting into this mess.”
There is a lot of character soup here, but it does sum up the story quite nicely.

Widow: Thomas' immensely superior mother Aisha, who is the family strategizer.
Merchant: Thomas' slightly more superior uncle Ramzi, who is the family fundraiser.
Most powerful person: Mallister, Prime Minister + murderer of a lot of people.
Judge: Kim, our sassy hanbok-wearing justice lady who kicks so much ass and takes no nonsense GAH. Nope, I'm not playing favourites.

Oh wait, was I supposed to talk romance? *shrugs* Uhh ... they may have been talking intensely just before this scene, and you know how movies have the guy kiss the girl to shut her up? This scene is a little different—first off, no girl; secondly, Dan asks permission.

But maybe it's a terrible kissing scene so again, would love critiques in the comments!

Oh oh oh! And if you like the sound of my WIPs, there may be a very exciting opportunity on February 27th, my birthday + blogoversary party! Or if you're impatient, I'll send out an extra Matryoshka scene on February 12th, so join my takeout army to read that scene.

Which is your favourite snippet? What are your thoughts on romance?


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Snazzy Snippets: Share Some Snippets in 2016!

WELCOME 2016. And with it, Snazzy Snippets is here for all writers and WIPs with gratuitous alliteration!

I'm continuing to co-host a bimonthly link-up with Emily @ Loony Literate, called Snazzy Snippets. For those who weren't around last time:
It’s an opportunity for writers! Every two months, we post a prompt or question for you to share a snippet of less than 500 words. It’s designed to let you have fun, analyse your work on a smaller level, or just write something to join in.

If you’re not a writer, or aren’t working on anything, don’t go back up the rabbit hole just yet. Read everyone’s wonderful snippets on the linky!
Still have questions? Snazzy Snippets has its own page on the blog, with FAQs and more. Take a look! I also wanted to say: this isn't just for novels! The prompts were designed with novels in mind, but most are also applicable to short stories, poetry, anything. We welcome all types of writing!

January prompts!

A snippet from page 16
or
A snippet of 16 words or fewer
or
A snippet about something NEW
e.g. a new year, new school, introducing a new person/character/setting, a new revelation

Remember to include your post URL in the linky! I'll be sure to visit ALL your snazzy snippets. Also, the next Snazzy Snippets may be coming earlier than expected, so stay tuned. And now MY snippets!

1. A snippet from page 16

The locket refused to come off her neck. This was why Mo preferred stealing from corpses—they weren't particularly attached to their jewellery.

The northerner certainly hadn't complained when Mo stole the locket. A northerner and a girl-corpse, so a witch. Except witches didn’t die, that was why the mipo lived sixty years without starving. Even while tricking idle fools out of their money by tossing a few sticks.

Mo stalked over to the mipo's counter and said in an undertone, "I want a consultation."

The mipo glanced at Mo's neck. "I don't touch that. Black magic."

Real magic. Powerful magic. The mipo was a fraud, everyone whispered, but no one shouted it just in case they were wrong. Mo moved her hand to the knife hidden in her coat.

"You can’t kill me, everyone knows that."

Why, had anyone tried? Mo killed a witch just this morning, and she wasn't inclined to trust everybody.

"I can hurt you," Mo said.
The mipo is a legit part of Chinese superstition — they're people who can commune with the dead. It's derived from wenmi, which translates literally to ask rice, so I created the term mipo or rice grandmother, which I thought was oddly fitting for my Chinese witchy story. The mipo only appears in this one snippet for the purposes of exposition (and for showing how fantastic real witches are.)

But unfortunately, the mipo here is truly based off superstition and Mo sees right through that. Being our compassionate, heroic protagonist, Mo immediately threatens the mipo to give her a straight answer.

Is the answer right? Is it wrong? You'll have to read WIBAS to find out. *grin*

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2. A snippet of sixteen words or fewer

they were done with the monsters. happily ever after.

/CHAPTER BREAK/

the monsters were not done with them.
WIBAS is really more an experimental work than anything I've written before. I play with structure and lots of prose poetry, and every now and then I drop in a line of fairytale-heavy reference. This is my favourite so far — the princess Mak and her friend Yi have just decided to leave behind their struggles and be wonderful friends. Everything is beautiful and nothing hurts, and the chapter ends!

Of course, I would never be so kind. The next chapter is that single sentence you see above, and the chapter after that is essentially their breakup.
Seriously ... I highly doubt I'll ever write a SINGLE healthy romance.
The monsters here are figurative and more psychological than anything, but there are indeed actual magic monsters in WIBAS. Again, my lips are sealed on this — but monsters are in some way a gateskeeper to the past and our protagonists encounter them.

3. A snippet about something NEW

Willem’s gait rapped a merry rhythm behind her when they entered the justiciary. “Work sweet work.”

Kim might have mirrored his grin, but her throat tightened when she looked up the stairs. “Stop smiling.”

“Why? We’re in the justiciary, there’s nothing to fear. Here you stand above everyone.”

To see more of the crumbling world. “Stop smiling,” Kim repeated and made her way up the stairs. “That area is restricted,” she called out to the southern boy. “The trial for this afternoon has been postponed.”

“Peace be with you,” the boy said, pressing his hand to his heart. “I’m looking for the justiciar.” His olive face was too square and solemn to be handsome, but that crooked smile made a thousand empty promises. That wasn’t why Kim’s heart was racing.

The boy wore the loose white robes of the south and the face of Stanley Mexrenne.

He was sixteen at most. Kim’s hands would shake if they weren’t clutching her skirts. So much for the rebels having no figurehead. It took all her focus to form the words, “I am the justiciar.”
And to wrap up, a Matryoshka snippet to mix things up! You guys saw a bit of this snippet in a previous round, so you can check that out for comparison if you like!

And a new person enters the political fray! Previous to this, a power-hungry Prime Minister, a quietly defiant Chancellor, a group of desperate rebels, and of course Kim herself were jostling in the capital ... but Thomas' arrival spurs them all into action.

At the same time, Thomas is also a call back to the civil war, which is an older time that none of our characters want to go back to. As a member of the literal next generation, Thomas uses methods quite different from his father. As his mother puts it:
Liberty is for the bygone age, when war was glory instead of memory. This is the time for vengeance, for widows and bastards.
Remember, if you like the sound of my WIPs, my takeout army hears about all beta reading opportunities first + reads alllll the extra snippets!

Get first dibs on the Mulan + Swan Lake retelling

Any thoughts on my snippets? What are your writing plans in 2016?


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I Finished My First Draft, Now What? (The LAST #WatchMeWrite!)

FIRST OF ALL: late Happy Holidays! (Or, whichever variant you prefer. 'Tis not the season for arguing.) If you haven't done so yet, please please please do fill in my end of 2015 survey. I promise to bring you more magic, madness, and murder in your takeout in 2016. :D

As you might know, I finished the first draft of WITCHES BLACK AND SILVER, my Swan Lake + Mulan retelling, in November.

Two things on Twitter! First, #novelaesthetics has been trending lately, and I did one for Matryoshka, and another for WIBAS:
Secondly, Emily and Cait are holding a #rewriteathon! You should join in by using the hashtag on Twitter, although I'm too busy with exams.

Still, before exam season started, I made #WatchMeWrite an outline of my already-written first draft:
Warning: turn DOWN the volume on your computer. The Force Awakens trailer boasts very loud music.
Or click to view in new tab.

(Pssst! Join my takeout army within these two weeks, and I'll send you a little WIBAS-related gift! Hint: it involves food. And CAKE.)
Basically, this process helps me go through my novel and figure out what major elements are missing or need tweaking. There are my major findings:

1. Retelling elements

Somewhere along the line, I seemed to have forgotten that WIBAS was a retelling. Which is crazy, because it was born out of an idea that I might mash up Mulan and Swan Lake. Fantastic idea, yes or yes?

So in the second draft, I'll be reinforcing ALLLL the parallels. On the Mulan side: crossdressing and disguises, martial girls, a family back home. On the Swan Lake side: duality, curses, and the entire idea of female competition.

2. Pacing

I've always struggled with this, to be honest. I hit the halfway point in terms of chapter count and realised, wait, I'm still setting stuff up. My novel starts off on a high-tension point and drops to really low from Act 1.5 to Act 2.5. Going to crank it up a little over there — I promise not to kill too many characters.

3. Atmosphere + Chinese elements

I've actually been framing WIBAS as VICIOUS meets THE NIGHT CIRCUS. The funny thing is, because I throw all prose out the window in the first draft, the Night Circus vibe isn't really very strong because that's one of the most atmospheric, beautifully and lyrically written books I've ever read ever.

So I'll be amping up the creepy and of course vicious atmosphere in the second draft. I'll also be adding more worldbuilding setting-wise, especially with respect to Chinese elements. And yes, I'll be talking about Chinese cake. (Not takeout so much, unfortunately.)

If you like the sound of this Mulan + Swan Lake retelling ... did you know I share secret sneak peeks and progress updates? It's true! Get them here:

Stay updated on Alyssa's Chinese-inspired fantasies!

Also: judging from preliminary survey results, I probably won't continue the #WatchMeWrite series in 2016 ... so this is THE LAST ONE. EVER.

HALP. Any suggestions to make WIBAS fabulous? What's your favourite cake?!? (that's not really relevant, I just thought I'd ask.)

#WatchMeWrite is a campaign started by E. R. Warren and Samantha Chaffin, wherein writers record their process, speed it up, add music, and show it to the rest of the world. Here are all past #WatchMeWrite videos!

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#WatchMeWrite: Characters with a will of their own

Hey hey hey! NaNoWriMo is nearly over, so that's why you get a #WatchMeWrite of ... not my NaNo project.

Instead, let's take a look back at Matryoshka, which will be first order of business once exams are over! (Yes, blookunity, winter is coming, but never fear. Alyssa will return ... or at least the blogging clone will.) A chapter of Kim, my fav character in this WIP:
If you join my takeout army before December 12th, you can read the entire chapter, so what are you waiting for?

As I construct my revision plan, I slowly realise just how much Kim has changed from her cameo appearance in Shadowplay, the Matryoshka prequel I am planning to rewrite into a novella someday. Kim was always intended to be something more — or rather, she intended to be something more.

Fictional character or not, Kim is not someone to be controlled ... not for long, at least.

A look back at Kim in Shadowplay:
“There are those who would like nothing more than a pretext such as this to eliminate those who share your view. Penning this document would be the stupidest thing you could possibly do, Senator Astova [better known to you as the Chancellor in Matryoshka]. I advise you to forget you ever thought of it and, failing that, never show it to the Prime Minister.”

“The Prime Minister is a reasonable man,” Mona Wynn [a random Senator] said. “He will listen to us.”

“Dominic Mallister will listen to nothing, take the list and execute you all for treason when the time is right.” Kim stood, finished her drink and placed it on a passing server’s tray. “And on that note, I take my leave. Good luck, Senators.”
When I first conceived the idea of Shadowplay, Kim definitely wasn't there — but somehow she found her place as a cameo, then as a secondary character, and look at her now in Matryoshka: a PoV character in her own right and my favourite character.

Instead of being the strict matron-like and randomly Asian character with an unbending grip on the law, Kim has now developed to be much, much more. And if you'd like to explore her character more fully, my takeout army will receive an early Christmas present in the form of an entire Kim chapter from Matryoshka. So don't miss out on the chance to read it!

Writers, how have your characters developed behind the scenes? Readers, do you approve of Kim's character changes?


Twitter-sized takeout:
#WatchMeWrite is a campaign started by E. R. Warren and Samantha Chaffin, wherein writers record their process, speed it up, add music, and show it to the rest of the world. Here are all past #WatchMeWrite videos!

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#LitLove: A Feminist Look at Persephone

The #LitLove series is a bimonthly collaborative blog event with TopazAnQiChristina, and myself, wherein we each express our literary love for different books under the same overarching theme/topic/author. For a more detailed backstory, take a look at the first #LitLove post.

This month, we're switching gears and celebrating our love for Greek myths. After all, folklore is no less a worthy story than novels or poetry, isn't it?

So who is Persephone, anyways?


Oh, no one special. Just Alyssa's FAVOURITE GREEK GODDESS OF EVER.
Persephone is the daughter of Demeter, the harvest goddess, and Zeus, who is supposed to be married to Hera but whatever. One day, Hades "abducted" Persephone down to the underworld. (Some sources say Zeus was in on the plot, strangely.) Naturally, Demeter was extremely displeased and decided that winter was coming.

In a rare bout of common sense, Zeus decided to command Hades to return Persephone so Demeter would bring back spring. But because Persephone ate the pomegranate seeds of the underworld, by some strange logic of Greek gods, she must return to the underworld and Hades during winter.
Source: old unreliable me. Because I know this myth far too well.

Okay, so why do you like her story, Alyssa?


1. It's not a tragedy. I mean, take a look at her story, and it starts off pretty miserable: dad decided to let his brother abduct you (seriously, Zeus, what the heck) to the underworld, mum mopes around and sends the (above?)world into winter. Clearly Persephone is a badass for ending up on top of her situation.
2. There is so much nuance in Persephone's story. Like the idea of womanhood, in how the pomegranate seeds stain her lips red and she can't ever truly leave the underworld (or her husband) again.

Here's the question, though: did Persephone taste the seeds of her own will? Because if she didn't, and Hades forced or tricked her into it, this is actually a pretty scary metaphor. Especially when you consider he wants to marry her. In that case it becomes an awfully Grimm story with that cautionary-tale vibe.

I shall not apologise for that pun.

But let's say she did. Let's say she ate the seeds (how do you eat seeds anyways?) because she wanted to stay in the underworld (and with Hades). Let's say she ate the seeds so that the other gods couldn't manipulate her again. Let's say she ate the seeds to be a queen. It may be wishful thinking on my part—but I much prefer this interpretation.

3. Excuse me, queen of the freaking underworld.
Me whenever Persephone is brought up in normal conversation.

Persephone has even inspired me to a retelling idea.


NaNo's always a great time for plot bunnies to try and distract me. So I have a Hades/Persephone retelling, a boy with a silver tongue and a girl with a golden touch, a throw me to the wolves and i shall return leading the pack vibe, the aftermath of a revolution, and this little gem:
We become monsters for the ones we love. They might love us back, if we were not monsters.
(But no, it's still not romance. I cannot romance, and yes, that is a verb and I'm a writer.)

Sound interesting? Stay updated on my progress of my villain!Persephone retelling here:

Stay updated on Alyssa's Persephone retelling!

Who is the most awesome Greek goddess, blookunity? (Go away, Aphrodite.) How has Persephone inspired you?

Don't forget to check out everyone else's posts:
AnQi: Arachne and Athena
Christina Im
Topaz Winters

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Snazzy Snippets: Evidence of a Terrible First Draft

So in case you didn't hear last week, Snazzy Snippets co-hosted by myself and Emily @ Loony Literate is back! Snazzy Snippets is a chance for writers to share snapshots of their writing around certain themes. You can find out more and link up with us here!

Today I'm sharing two snippets from my NaNo project Witches Black and Silver, and one from my other WIP Matryoshka.

WARNING: the first two snippets were written in NaNo, and are appropriately rambling and absolute weirdness from typing too quickly. I hope they are at least entertaining.

Oh, and another thing: because of school and such, I have not been replying or commenting back for the last couple posts. I'm barely finding enough time to complete my NaNo project, so right now blogging is on the back burner. I have posts to last for a few weeks, but we'll see. Thanks for understanding!

A snippet without dialogue

Mo had time to wash the blood off her hands and violently eat a Hong Kong snack—probably fishballs—before she had to be at the mechanical shop.

Mechanics were dull and Mo really preferred the impossibilities of the nighttime sky. They said the stars disappeared above Hong Kong decades ago, but the city broke down and the stars shone again. Mo sometimes stood on one of the tallest buildings with teeth at the top—yes, I mean IFC in case you were wondering—and looked over the skyline and felt really rather powerful. And this paragraph was supposed to be poetic but it’s too early in the morning.

Is this in any way clear she likes maths instead?

Besides, mechanics paid less. But Mo needed a pretence that she wasn’t actually robbing corpses because tradition. Everyone pretended that was still a thing, and this line should be more quotable.
... I did tell you I rambled in these snippets.

WIBAS is set in Hong Kong, or at least starts in Hong Kong and kind of becomes a roadtrip up north to China. It's all rather vague right now. It is, however, a futuristic wartime Hong Kong, so it's not completely realistic, but I do hope to convey that sense of a city almost too large to remember its people.

A snippet featuring a family member


This being a Mulan retelling, you'll be surprised to hear Mo's father never appears in person. It's complicated. I swear it's still a retelling. Here, have her brother instead:
Mo murdered two people that morning and her family would never know.

And of course she didn’t feel guilty about that, and she didn’t feel guilty about brushing her mum off. Mo went off to boil Chinese medicine, which smelled absolutely horrible and might be kind of useless, if she went by the mechanic, but it worked if you believed in it kinda thing.

Bro: I don’t like this.

Mo: Too bad. I don’t like life much. Drink up! [feeds to bro] [cuddles] Mo hugged him mainly because she wished someone did the same for her, and her mum totally used to, but no.

Bro: Could I go to school?

Mo: We’ll see. [He always asked, her answer was always the same, and she did not take pleasure in this lie.]

Mo never went to school bc she was poor and stuff. Her mum tried to teach her bits of stuff when her father was around but then she had depression and stopped. Her grandmother had a proper education but that didn’t happen.

Basically, to sum up this family, the dad was missing, the mum had depression, Mo had some sort of murder complex, and the bro had some kind of chronic illness.
Yeah, that is actually my first draft. Revising is going to be such a pain in the neck, to put it politely.
Me when revising, to put it less politely.

A snippet that took forever to write

To stop the blookunity from rioting at the abysmal quality of the above two snippets, have a snippet from Matryoshka that's slightly more coherent:
Mallister curled his fingers around a quill. “We are dealing with criminals of a most subtle mind. Thomas schemes like his father, Ramzi Nejem pushed for war right alongside Stanley Mexrenne, and Aisha would throttle me if not for reputation. There’s no shame in admitting we need help.”

Kim reclaimed her composure during his speech. “An extra garrison is not what Your Excellency has in mind?”

“No indeed. I thought we might hire the pirates of Barbos.”

The Midli islands had their fair share of pirates sailing the straits, but Barbos boasted brutality and absolutely no morals. Kim never managed to drag them into the courts after their attack on the capital at the end of the war.

“I would go myself, but …” When he sighed, Mallister’s breath rattled like an old man’s.

They’d all grown old. They stitched together the country after war and the rebels tore the stitches apart. The fight didn’t seem worth making. “What terms would you offer?”

“You disapprove.”

Kim tolerated much that she disapproved. “Justice is blind. I am not.”
I don't even know why this snippet was so hard — I think it was just general out-of-inspiredness at the time, and the wording still feels awkward to me, but I am rather proud of Kim's lines. I'm rather proud of Kim, in general, as I feel obliged to mention she is the hanbok-wearing justice lady of Matryoshka.

Did you link up with Snazzy Snippets? (Hint: click here to join us.) What books are in your hometown?

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Snazzy Snippets: NaNoWriMo is here!

WELCOME NANO. And with it, Snazzy Snippets is coming back!

Don't be afraid to share your first-draft NaNo snippets; but of course, Snazzy Snippets is for all WIPs!

I'm continuing to co-host a bimonthly link-up with Emily @ Loony Literate, called Snazzy Snippets. For those who weren't around last time:
It’s an opportunity for writers! Every two months, we post a prompt or question for you to share a snippet of less than 500 words. It’s designed to let you have fun, analyse your work on a smaller level, or just write something to join in.

If you’re not a writer, or aren’t working on anything, don’t go back up the rabbit hole just yet. Read everyone’s wonderful snippets on the linky!
This is your chance to shine, grasshoppers, so comb through your WIPs for a snazzy snippet that fits one of our themes:

A snippet without dialogue
or
A snippet featuring a friend/family member
or
A snippet that took FOREVER to write

And of course you can do more than one in one or more snippets. It can be something you whipped up at 3AM yesterday, or lingering in your ms for a year. There are no rules. Just have fun, and remember to include your post URL in the linky!

Whether or not you're taking this chance to shine (pfft, why wouldn't you though), do take a look around everyone's links! I'll be sure to visit your snazzy snippets.

Still have questions? Snazzy Snippets now has its own page on the blog, with FAQs and more. Take a look!

Thoughts on this month's prompts? Which WIP would you excerpt if you join?


Twitter-sized takeout:
  • #amwriting lately? It's your chance to shine in @AlyssaC_HK and @thelooneytuney's Snazzy Snippets link-up! (Click to Tweet)

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#WatchMeWrite + Witchy Tracklist

FIRST OF ALL: early Happy Halloween, blookunity! How fitting that I unveil the tracklist of my witchy NaNo novel today.

But first: another #WatchMeWrite of me, this time planning out the magic system!
The music for this video is Short Hair from the Mulan soundtrack — Alex suggested it for the tracklist, but it didn't quite mesh with the rest of the aesthetic. It was too ingenious to use the Mulan soundtrack for a Mulan retelling, though, so I used it instead for the video!

Additionally, the Witches Black and Silver tracklist has been finalised with the help of my wonderful, wonderful takeout army! Listen to the entire witchy tracklist on Soundcloud here. These are the songs they picked:
  • Once Upon a Time (Lana Del Rey), suggested by Heather
    • But do you know how much the idea of past relationships factor into WiBaS because THEY DO and Heather is clearly a psychic
  • Devil's Backbone (The Civil Wars), suggested by Topaz
    • Topaz was the first one to introduce me to The Civil Wars' Poison and Wine, and again she amazes me with her musical aesthetic
  • Hurricane (Halsey), suggested by Topaz
    • I only recently discovered Halsey but I am ALL THE EXCITE about Badlands
  • Begging for Thread (Banks), suggested by Eve
    • I discovered this literally two days before the suggestion so Eve may or may not be a stalker (the most amazing kind)
  • Your Bones (Of Monsters and Men)
    • Melody suggested a series of OMAM songs, and the vibe was so perfect, but the lyrics didn't quite match so I picked out Your Bones instead
Thank you all for your help! I couldn't do it without my takeout army :D To thank you all, I will be sending out the first paragraphs of WiBaS to you lovelies next week. The rest of you, don't miss out on the early-bird snippet!

Name your favourite song of the tracklist in the comments! What are you doing for NaNo? Writing, editing, cheering me on?


Twitter-sized takeout:
#WatchMeWrite is a campaign started by E. R. Warren and Samantha Chaffin, wherein writers record their process, speed it up, add music, and show it to the rest of the world. Here are all past #WatchMeWrite videos!

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How Many Retellings Are Too Much? (Or, I'm obsessed with Mulan)

This post has been rewritten and will soon have a new home.

In the meantime, why not check out my Mulan + Swan Lake retelling riiiiight here?

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Beautiful Books: The Witchy NaNo novel

Hey blookunity! (That's the new community name on the blog, short for "book blogging community". I'll use it until you guys answer to it.)

Today I'm linking up with Beautiful Books, an alternate of the usual Beautiful People hosted by Cait @ Paper Fury and Sky @ Further Up and Further In. Writers answer questions about their book, and today, I get to introduce my NaNo novel!

1. How did you come up with the idea for your novel, and how long have you had the idea?


It first arose as an errant idea on Twitter in May:
8 people favorited said Tweet (thanks lovelies!), so I took that to mean THE ENTIRE WORLD LOVES IT and set out to write it.

More than that, the idea of commercialised magic has always been one of my Tumblr-inspired writing ideas. I admit I'm unfamiliar with writing urban fantasy, but hey, nothing can go wrong. It's MULAN AND SWAN LAKE.

2. Why are you excited to write this novel?


Because (1) MULAN (2) Swan. Lake. C'mon. (3) 80% girl cast (4) magical Starbucks (5) I call it VICIOUS meets THE NIGHT CIRCUS and I love those two books far too much for my own sanity.

My inability to be coherent answers this question quite adequately, I think.

3. What is your novel about, and what is the title?


Oh right, I haven't mentioned the title yet. It's titled WITCHES BLACK AND SILVER. It's a Mulan/Swan Lake retelling, set in war-torn Hong Kong.

4. Sum up your characters in one word each. (Feel free to add pictures!)


Huh, what if I included a screenshot of my character descriptions? I mean, Cait herself is the chief advocate of rebelling in link-ups. ... Never mind.
MO: Vicious.
MAK: Envy.
YI: Vulnerable.

5. Which character(s) do you think will be your favourite to write? Tell us about them!


Mo is basically my threatening devilish side who likes maths, and Mak is my petty jealous competitive side. While I'm going to love them both, my favourite will be the Huntress, also called Yi. She's a deaf assassin who used to be friends with Mak but is now charged with hunting her down.

She's the antagonist, to no one's surprise.

6. What is your protagonist’s goal, and what stands in the way?


Grave-robber Mo stumbles upon a cursed locket that gives her the appearance of the northern princess by day and a swan's form by night. To break the curse, she must return the locket to its owner. But monsters prowl the northern lands, and Mo must survive both witches and witch-hunters on her journey.

7. Where is your novel set? (Show us pictures if you have them!)


It's set in a futuristic, very dark Hong Kong. Later our stage shifts to the slightly less war-torn magical north, with magical Starbucks and other commercial magical places. I haven't actually got photos, but a similar vibe to the Pinterest board.

8. What is the most important relationship your character has?


Because, after all, it's a Mulan retelling, Mo's major motivation is her family. But because they don't factor much into the plot, I'm instead going to talk about the Mak/Huntress relationship. Basically, the two used to be friends until the Huntress got better at magic than Mak.

Being a reasonable princess, Mak more or less banished Huntress and the Huntress ended up enslaved to the enemy prince. It goes downhill from there as they're pitted against each other in a war.

9. How does your protagonist change by the end of the novel?


I haven't decided on a character development arc, actually. But Mo will definitely have to come to terms with her loose morals and looser knives, while Mak has to deal with her breakup with the Huntress.

10. What themes are in your book? How do you want your readers to feel when the story is over?


I actually deal with a lot of themes. War and its awkward moral standards, rivalry and competitiveness, deception and disguises, friendship. And because of the diversity, we also have some thoughts on ableism and body shaming.

How I want people to feel?
This was basically what I thought my two comp titles, VICIOUS and THE NIGHT CIRCUS, did to me. They wrecked my feels and I fell in love with them.

BONUS! Tell us your 3 best pieces of advice for others trying to write a book in a month.

  1. Sparse drafting. You have got to leave blanks and let imperfections be.
  2. Hole yourself up and ignore other pesky humans and responsibilities. It's hard to write so much so quickly.
  3. Mermaid tears and ground unicorn horn. I SWEAR by these two.
Interested in this Mulan/Swan Lake retelling? Join my takeout army today; I'll be sending out the first paragraphs out to them by the end of NaNo!

So, blookunity*: what do you think of Witches Black and Silver? Oh, and do leave a link if you're in Beautiful Books!


*I'm serious about this. You should just submit to my whims.

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Secret Life of a Book Blogger and Writer Tags

Exciting news, people! First, today you get to find out all my writing and book blogging secrets. Secondly, I'm tackling two tags today, and two tags next week, and soon my tag backlog will be reduced to TWO only. So if you have tag things, TAG ME IN THEM.

^^ That was true when I wrote this post. A few days later as I schedule it, I have been tagged in new things. It does not matter. STILL TAG ME FOR EVERYTHING. I shall get to it!

First, Emily @ Loony Literate tagged me to talk about the Secret Life of a Book Blogger! I was eyeing this one for ages because it looked ridiculously fun, despite the vague questions.

1. How long have you been a blogger? Two years and a half! Admittedly, for the first year and more I completely ignored the blogosphere, so really it's only been a year in the real blogger life.

2. At which point do you think you'll stop blogging? I genuinely don't know. I love the book blogging community (even though that was too long; we should just call ourselves the blookunity) but I'm also having trouble keeping up with my twice-weekly blog schedule.

Expect that I'll switch back to weekly posting at some point, and then maybe biweekly. But will I give up on blogging?
3. What is the best thing about the community? Well, the "blookunity", clearly. (I'm loving this name too much.) Also that we can be absolutely crazy and no one will question it.
4. What is the worst thing? What would you do to make it okay? When the words are stuck on their way from your heart to your fingers, or the words come but they're the wrong words. Not sure that there's a way to fix it, but I am working on revisions.

5. How long does it take you to create/find pictures to use? I'm trying to rid myself of the habit of running to Google images and spending 3.4 seconds sourcing them, so instead I use 8.4 days taking pictures of things in my house and negotiate a treaty in 6.1 months with the graphic design witches.

Gifs, though, I'm never going to stop using those. Those take seconds, especially with my Pinterest board.
6. Who is your book crush? I'm going to have to say Holland from A Darker Shade of Magic is pretty adorable, but also enough of an antagonist I can feel completely justified in throwing my TBR at him. Even magic cannot withstand the weight of my TBR. Puns ahoy!

7. Which author would you like to have on your blog? Vague question, so my answer is: George R. R. Martin. I'll distract him with lavishly described takeout, borrow Topaz Winters' dragons, and rip the next books out of his fingers.
8. What do you wear when you write your blog posts? See, I kind of write my blog posts everywhere all the time, so it's hard to generalise. But probably mostly in my PJs.

9. How long does it take for you to prepare? Well, typically it takes me about one week to identify a suitable person, maybe two more weeks to murder them, and then I have to wait for the next full moon to brew the necessary ointments. Then I make my sacrifice and voila! Blog post.

10. How do you feel about the book blogger community? I said this once, I'm gonna say it again: we ought to rename ourselves 'blookunity'. All those in favour, I'll see you in the comments section.

11. What do you think one should do to get a successful blog? I'm still working on that, but my tips so far:
  • Readable design. Seriously, I started out with white-on-black text and what was past me even thinking?
  • Socialise in the blookunity. (I refuse to believe this is not a word. IT IS.) 
  • And of course, have fun.
(As always, I am nominating people for both tags at once, so keep on scrolling!)
Next, Opal has tagged me in the Writer's Life for Me Tag!

1. What kind of writer are you?
2. When did you start writing? What made you want to try it? I'm pretty sure I started writing because we had to do compositions for school. Then I wrote a terrible The Golden Compass rip-off (three, I think, but we don't talk about them). I tried it because ... words, I guess?

3. What inspires your stories? Other stories.

4. What themes do you like to explore in your writing? Feminism, racism, rebellion (normally poorly executed and unwise rebellion), legacy, deception. I'm gonna quote my own tagline: magic, madness, and murder.

5. Are you a pantster or a plotter or a bit of both?
I think that even my outlines are very short drafts, and my first draft is just a very detailed and messy outline. You can check out my posts about sparse draft if you're interested in my blitz writing strategy.

6. Where are you at in your journey? Querying, agented, published? So, I should be querying Winner Takes All, but I also have this nagging feeling that I ought to set it aside for a year or two and revise it then. So right now: just writing.

7. Have you ever entered any writing contests? Finaled? Won? I probably have, but I genuinely don't recall since I typically only enter city-wide contests with themes like "Good people good deeds!" and ... I don't even like what I submit.

8. Who are your writer heroes? There are many, most of them published authors, but the online writers who are the reason I am still writing today: Heather. Christina. Topaz. Cait. Aimee. And everyone who has ever given me writing advice or read my works or anything.
9. Have you been to a writing conference? Share your best or worst conference experience. No, I haven't, and I'm miserable.

10. Top 3 tips you'd give to newbie writers? I have to say I'm not that experienced, but:
  • Delete the aspiring before writer. You write. You are a writer.
  • Writing is hard. Love it anyways.
  • Write what you want, but not when you want. Write constantly.
This time, I'm tagging some fabulous commenters on The Devil Orders Takeout for both tags: Ashley, Romi, Liz Brooks, Nirvana. Thank you so much (to everyone, but particularly you few) for your continued support!

Should book bloggers be called the blookunity?!? What tips would you give book bloggers or writers? Who are YOUR writer heroes?

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Writing Kitchens [2]: How Can We Write Diversely?

how to write diversely
ETA: this post was written as a teen and may not reflect my current views. Leaving it here because the comments are gold. 

We have a tough topic and a long post, but it would mean the world if you stuck with me today because diverse representation is important and really, it doesn't need to be difficult. First, a word of philosophy: write whatever you want, so long as you respect (a) yourself and (b) other people. The following is only advice.

First of all, what is diverse representation? We hear things like #WeNeedDiverseBooks and LGBTQIA+ all the time, but what does it really mean? The WNDB site defines it like this:
We recognize all diverse experiences, including (but not limited to) LGBTQIA, people of color, gender diversity, people with disabilities*, and ethnic, cultural, and religious minorities.

*We subscribe to a broad definition of disability, which includes but is not limited to physical, sensory, cognitive, intellectual, or developmental disabilities, chronic conditions, and mental illnesses (this may also include addiction). Furthermore, we subscribe to a social model of disability, which presents disability as created by barriers in the social environment, due to lack of equal access, stereotyping, and other forms of marginalization.
This may seem overwhelming. But this really, really long list is why I simply stamp my foot and refuse to calm down when people say, "Oh, I'm not personally familiar with any form of diversity, so I shall hide in my rabbit hole and write straight-cis-white-Christian-boy fiction."

Approach 1 to Writing Diversely: Write what you know but others don't.


Repeat after me: you have seen diversity in your life.

This doesn't mean you must necessarily belong to some sort of minority or marginalised group or anything. One aversion is when for some reason you know a lot about a religion, culture, etc. because you studied it for a thesis or something. But let's say you have never learned anything but "mainstream" stuff.

Open up your Facebook friends list, or Twitter following list, or whatever. Scroll through it. Then look yourself in the eye and tell yourself, "No one I know has a diverse experience." They are all heterosexual cisgender white able-bodied, etc. etc. etc. people.
See? It's impossible. (I may have cheated, because you'd have to claw out one of your eyes. But my point stands.)

Maybe your cousin has panic attacks, or your best friend is Hispanic, or — well, you get the idea. Or maybe, you live in Hong Kong (hello there!) or Singapore or the Phillippines or Saudi Arabia or. My point is, every person is one step ahead of someone else in learning about diverse experiences. Find that step. Write about it.

And if you're writing diversely from what you know but others don't, representation suddenly becomes not hard at all. Posts about how terrifying it is to write diversely without appropriation or stereotyping are everywhere on the Internet. But it shouldn't be terrifying to base representation off your own experience, because doesn't everyone base their fiction off their reality?

(Really, the terror comes from the second approach, which I have also used. All in good time.)

This is why it was second nature for me to write Winner Takes All and Witches Black and Silver because even if I fail Chinese tests, I have lived Chinese culture. If I do use research, it isn't panicked "Tell me EVERYTHING about this country/religion/etc.", it's "huh I heard that once is it true?"

So the next time you want to scream "But I can't write diverse books!" remember this. Look for how your experience has differed from everyone else's. It's good practice for college app essay writing.

OH. And. Support diverse authors, too. Aimee @ Deadly Darlings has a list for you.

Approach 2 to Writing Diversely: Research your brain out.


See, the one above was the easy one. This approach is the more common, though, and even if it's more difficult, this shouldn't stop you from trying at all.

The reason diverse representation is so important? Thus far, the creators of books and other media have primarily been white straight cis etc. etc. people. Because they were more privileged, they also received better education and had more time to create and consume all this media.
But the world is changing. Past "minorities" are now consuming media, and they are not seeing themselves in it. So we clamour for diverse representation, and because (a) many creators are still privileged and have fewer diverse experiences and (b) the status quo is difficult to change, always. So people fret.

(And fretting is good. Fretting means you care.)

So everyone starts to exclaim, what if I get it wrong? what if I fall into stereotypes? what if I forget this really important thing and I get mobbed? why is the icing on the cake still white that's not diverse! HEEEEEELP ME!
Not the last one. But the fear is real, and whenever I write outside my comfort zone, it happens. My Matryoshka readers, I hope, are prepared to calm me down with diverse cake when I panic.

But it is possible. The Internet is an amazing place. Wikipedia, online encyclopedias, Tumblrs and blogs about different experiences. Diversity Cross Check is somewhere you can go to chat with people with diverse experiences, and intersectionality is fabulous here. And there's Writing With Colour and Writing in Variance and really, there is no excuse anymore to not write diversely because of unfamiliarity.

If you're really worried? Talk to someone relevant. The blogosphere is an amazing amazing place. Tweet for help, DM people you sort of know, write a blog post saying, "I need betas who have experience being cyborgs and living off pine trees and worship three hundred deities." Again, not really. But in 99% of cases, when you ask, people will answer and help.

And people are much, much better than websites, because like it or not, there is this thing called a collective memory. So if you try and say, romanticise the Opium War, I will come after you personally with a frying pan. (And this is why writing from your own diverse experiences will probably be more powerful than research and imagination cobbled together.) Behind the diversity, there are people.

(This is why I have my Chinese culture posts. And know that if you ask me a question about China, I will probably come back to you with a page-long essay, half of which is translated from the Baidu page. I will answer.)

And one last note: by no means allow your fear of writing diversity "wrongly" stop you at all. Not one bit. Write your own diverse experiences, write someone else's — but write diversity.

Which approach do you think is better? Also, recommend a diverse book in the comments!


Writing diversely is important, but so is reading diversely. Join my takeout army and start reading my Mulan translation! Call it research if you're hoping to write a Chinese setting.

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#WatchMeWrite: Witchy NaNo Novel

#WatchMeWrite is a campaign started by E. R. Warren and Samantha Chaffin, wherein writers record their process, speed it up, add music, and show it to the rest of the world. Here are all past #WatchMeWrite videos!

This month, we're taking a break from Matryoshka and instead talking about my NaNoWriMo project. There's only a month left, which means planning is now under way! This November, I'll be writing Witches Black and Silver, a Mulan + Swan Lake crossover retelling.
Last month, I sent a special upgraded #WatchMeWrite to my takeout army, and it had a voiceover explaining my stylistic choices and my characters' quirks. This month, all of you can enjoy the voiceover! Watch the video above and hear me ramble.
I describe Witches Black and Silver as VICIOUS meets THE NIGHT CIRCUS. (I'm ridiculously proud that I have comp titles for once.) What you can expect from WiBaS, as I'm calling it:
  • 80% girl cast
  • it's actually 100% if we only count important characters
  • commercialised magic at the corner store
  • I'm serious, there's a magical Starbucks
  • magical ability rivalry that poisons friendships
  • grave robbery and wanton threats
  • magic and madness and murder and monsters
In the next month, I'll be hard at work planning and preparing for NaNo. I find myself needing some input and advice on one thing, though — if you want to take part in the making of my Mulan + Swan Lake retelling, join my takeout army now to help out in this secret mission before next Saturday!

What excites you most about WiBaS? Where does my accent come from? Comment away.


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